What if the reason your About page feels so hard to write isn't a skill problem — it's twelve years of training telling you to not make waves… fit in?
I spent eight years making video biographies before I saw what that training actually cost people.
My early videos were terrible. I let people say what they'd been trained to say.
No juice. No story.
Then I learned to ask different questions. And the real stories came out — the ones they'd never told anyone.
You learned the same lesson I did.
Fit in.
Don't stand out.
Then you built a business, and had to write about yourself. No rubric for that.
So you wrote what felt safe — the credentials, the résumé, the polished bio.
But "safe" isn't what a prospect feels reading it.
They feel outmatched. Threatened. Like they don't measure up.
And they go quiet.
Paste your About page below. I'll show you where it's still playing it safe — what it's costing you, how to fix it, and a bonus suggestion of a potential story waiting to be discovered.
A real read, from me, back to you within a business day. I personally review and finalize every analysis — free for the first 20 people each week.
Parts of this analysis are generated automatically. Every response is personally reviewed by me before it's sent. The Stories section, and the final review, are mine alone.